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Bemoaningly Unfulfilled
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I know these feelings all too well,
want to deny the truth however hard I will,
you told me repeatedly I shouldn’t mind,
to love is to disregard the word, but still
come in here and let me take you by the hand, for
in a moment I’ll try to show you all there is,
my love, so earnest, bemoaningly remains yet unfulfilled,
mouth and lips, wide opened,
please let them fill you truthfully from deep within.
want to deny the truth however hard I will,
you told me repeatedly I shouldn’t mind,
to love is to disregard the word, but still
come in here and let me take you by the hand, for
in a moment I’ll try to show you all there is,
my love, so earnest, bemoaningly remains yet unfulfilled,
mouth and lips, wide opened,
please let them fill you truthfully from deep within.
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A brilliant poem, I really love how many ways there are to interpret who it is you're talking to. Is it a lover? One you wish to be a lover? There's so many possibilities explained in such a short poem. Bravo! It's just a shame it took me so long to get the time to read it!
May I suggest sharing it in a poetry group? This definitely deserves some more views.
May I suggest sharing it in a poetry group? This definitely deserves some more views.